you have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
* describe the item
* explain where and when you left it
* say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing with regard to an lost item on one your train.
The have lost my head phone which is worth of $250. The color of the headphone is black with red edged and the brand name is Beats. Actually it is an wireless headphone with bluetooth option.
I have boarded Chennai express on Sunday evening at 7 pm from chennai to Mumbai. I was seated in S4 coach and my seat number is 48L. I remember i was using the headphone a few minutes prior to my arrival designation. After I reached the station and booked the taxi, i realized that my headphone is missing.
I would request the company to assist me in finding my headphone. I have attached the contact detail and also kindly post it through fast courier and I am ready to pay for the service.
i am await for your prompt response,
Yours faithfully,
Smith John
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| 2018-05-22 | Ielts2018_attempt 3 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... Madam, I am writing with regard to an lost item on one your train. The h...
^^
Line 6, column 146, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the brand name is Beats. Actually it is an wireless headphone with bluetooth optio...
^^
Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in S4 coach and my seat number is 48L. I remember i was using the headphone a fe...
^
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h and my seat number is 48L. I remember i was using the headphone a few minutes p...
^
Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eached the station and booked the taxi, i realized that my headphone is missing. ...
^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...d I am ready to pay for the service. i am await for your prompt response, Y...
^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d I am ready to pay for the service. i am await for your prompt response, Y...
^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'awaited'.
Suggestion: awaited
...m ready to pay for the service. i am await for your prompt response, Yours fait...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49358974359 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39927771018 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.5837394488 44.8134815571 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.7272727273 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112823031043 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407711892468 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536757116409 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760655308892 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786613876414 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.