when students move to a new schools, schools can help them with their problem.
agree or disagree.
Students study in school before going university and getting bright future. Moving and adapting in a new enviornmnent is rule of nature. Students feel some probelms when they move to a new school. Schools provides some facillities where students get help to solve their problems in new school environment. In my view, there are couple of ways that school can help students with their problems which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, schools offer orientation program when students move and start a new school. This orientation help student to know new system of school. As they know system , rules and environment they adapt them in new school. Students feel stressed when they move to a new school where they hva no idea about school campus and where different departments are located. My own experience is a compelling example of this. My parents moved in chicago from California as my father got new job in Chiacgo. So I had to move in a new school in Chicago. I was introvert nature so I struggled and stressed how I would be adapted in that new environment. My parents talked with my new school advisor, he mentioned that the school offers orientation once it start. Therefore, I attend that orientation. There were couple of school members and other students in orientation when I attended it. Teacher and other faculty staff gave important information regaring school such as map of school campus, teacher’s name and where there offices were located. I was relieved after attending that orientation. I adapted new school environment easily. And within two months, I could start my study there effectively.This example shows school helps to solve their problem when they move to a new school.
Besides, schools provide tutoring system where students get help for their problems. Sometimes, students cannot understand their lectures in class when they move to a new school. Sometimes they feel inferiority to ask their questions to their new teacher in front of class. As a result, it make them struggeled to perform study well. My own past experience is convincing example of this. When I moved to new school in grade 7, I could not understand my new teacher accent. I was feeling shame to ask my question in front of 50 students as I was introvert. As a result, I got poor grade C in my science paper. That teacher knew my probelm and suggested to take help from tutor in school. The tutore exaplained that science chapeter again, I could understand concept and got A grade. This example shows how schools can help students with their problems.
To sum up, students feel stressed when they move in a new school. Schools provide many facilities that help them to solve their problem. School offeres orientation program that students can attend and cope up with new school environment. School provides tutoring system where student can take help to understand study parts if they missed class or could not understand in the lectures in class.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2480.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94023904382 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69102800443 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40438247012 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.036764595 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3428571429 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469666861671 0.236089414692 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154317783112 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109888813948 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.391449754597 0.150856017488 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053355582744 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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