Television serves many different functions. It help people relax, get information and also a companion for lonely. Do you think this statement is true
Television is one of the most important invention of twentieth century due to its myriad of benefits. These days its difficult to think without television as it has became part of our life. In this essay, I shall be discussing about the impact of television in human life.
At the outset, myriad of benefits can be attributed the importance of television as people feel relax after watching programs even if they are alone. There are various channels which provides information about science, history and culture, and by watching these channels, one can update their knowledge. Moreover, by watching live sports, one can get real time update without going to stadium, where sport is going on. I feel that television is a good companion as people do not get bored even if they are alone.
Another key justification for this argument is that television has made our life as a global village since people can get to know about things that are happening at the other side of the world. For instance, live news channel such as BBC shows live news across the world at the same time.
In conclusion, television plays a vital role in our life as it entertain all age group people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79411764706 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56647492506 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7994252826 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179180856055 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725480796821 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554043733055 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931263010648 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366758182845 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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