A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.– Describe your point of view.– Say what you like about the show and why.– Ask the newspaper to take some action.You should write at least 150 words.

Essay topics:

A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
– Describe your point of view.
– Say what you like about the show and why.
– Ask the newspaper to take some action.
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter in reference to the article published in Entertainment section in yesterday’s newspaper. The article was based on a popular television show, “Shri Ganesh”, currently being telecasted on Sony channel. I think the reporter views might mislead the audience.

Let me explain my opinion in more detail. This television series is based on our God, “Lord Ganesh”. I like the various events being shown about our God’s life, because all those incidences are being explained in detail, and briefs about the significance of the customs being followed in our day-to-day life. On the contrary, the reporter had written in his column that the show must be closed by mentioning some irrelevant facts about this serial.

I request you to publish either a new article that demonstrates the importance of this show or an apology letter from the reporter.

I hope you will take an immediate action on this.

Yours faithfully,
Harman Kaur

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think, in my opinion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39873417722 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04956255186 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696202531646 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5705857446 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167303570737 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629553854555 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486540609843 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109295978227 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312483135858 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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