Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with reference to the article named "Inappropriate Content", published on 21st May 2018. The article is complaining about the new TV show called "Road Run" on MTV, saying "The show displays content unsuitable for children". This line in the article can change the views of the audience towards the program or mislead them. For example, One of my friends agreed the reporter's views and decided not to watch it again as it might impact her children.
In my opinion, though the program has content not suitable for children due to real bike stunts, adventure task or fights between contestants, However, a warning is given in start that the show meant only for adults. In addition, show time is the late night so that it will prevent children from watching it. I like this show because it presents some mind blowing stunts and challenging task, For instance, selling food items prepared by you on street without any prior experience or team task on bikes. By watching it, I get entertained and motivated at the same time.
I request you to ask the reporter to correct the views presented by him and republish the article or an apology from him in writing.
I hope you will take necessary action about it.
Yours faithfully,
xxx
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for instance, in my opinion, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24096385542 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12355061468 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3308328309 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232934689017 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919184959486 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626807264324 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138343678477 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492214758666 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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