Dear Sally,
How are you and family? It's been ages since we were last in touch. I am writing to ask your help in collecting donations for a charity organization named "Helping Hands".
It is collecting money to provide funds for cancer patients who are below 18 years. I want to extend my help towards this wonderful deed as it has saved a huge number of children suffering from it, for instance, death troll for it was 2400 in 2016, which has fallen down to 1300 due to money provided by the organisation. Moreover, I have seen my cousin who was just 13 and died suffering from this incurable disease, As a result, my whole family was devastated by her death. Thus, Keeping that in mind, I want to do whatever is in my hand to save lives.
As you are my good friend, I want you to be a part of this by collecting funds from different sources. I know you always look for such opportunity where you can give back to the society. Hence, it is the best chance to provide a helping hand towards it.
Let me tell you about my ideas for implementing it. Firstly, you can come over to my place this weekend and we can cover two blocks by going personally to each and every house to collect donations. Secondly, we can post on social media regarding this charity work and can create a group for the same. Consequently, we can increase the number of people willing to donate.
Let me know what you think about this? waiting for your reply.
See you soon,
Sara
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- Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details. - why do you want to collect money for the charity organization? - Ask your friend to help - explain in detail 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 40, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Waiting
... Let me know what you think about this? waiting for your reply. See you soon, Sara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, as for, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45756457565 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5068906006 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7847176041 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0588235294 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297115900232 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913406695559 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856781677848 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169358929535 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626726918792 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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