Dear Sally,
How are you and family? It's been ages since we were last in touch. I am writing to ask your help in collecting donations for a charity organization named "Helping Hands".
It is collecting money to provide funds for cancer patients who are below 18 years. I want to extend my help towards this wonderful deed as it has saved a huge number of children suffering from it, for instance, death troll for these children was 2400 in 2016, which has fallen down to 1300 due to donations provided by the organisation. Moreover, I have seen my cousin who was just 13 years old and died suffering from cancer, As a result, my whole family was devastated by her death. Thus, Keeping that in mind, I want to do whatever is in my hand to save lives.
As you are my good friend, I want you to be a part of this along with me in collecting donations. I know you always look for such opportunity where you can give back to the society. Hence it is the best chance to provide a helping hand towards it.
Let me tell you about my ideas for implementing it. Firstly, you can come over to my place this weekend and we can cover two blocks by going personally to each and every house asking them for donation. Secondly, we can post on social media regarding this charity and can create a group for the same. Consequently, we can increase the number of people willing to donate.
Let me know what you think about this?
See you soon,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 183, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...where you can give back to the society. Hence it is the best chance to provide a help...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, as for, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4552238806 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50151435534 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7309384454 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.625 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28782134078 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872488325799 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846580198459 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152964362394 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827239930998 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.