Dear Dave,
I am writing with regards to a party organized by me for my organization on 12th June. The party was held in your hotel for celebrating the 10th anniversary.
First of all, I would like to thank you for such a great party. It started with award distribution for top performers followed by our director's speech and Finally, ended by a wonderful live music show. It all went so good that we are thinking of celebrating upcoming events in your hotel only.
Secondly, I am overwhelmed by the service of staff members and especially their behavior, for instance, one of our team members broked the glass mistakenly but staff member named Sam was so polite and cleaned the mess immediately. Also to my surprise, I was thrilled when I saw that your hotel managed to get best music band which was like the cherry on the top of a cake.
As I already mentioned, we are thinking of future events to celebrate in your hotel, I would like to advise some improvements like poolside area can be increased. Moreover, lightings in poolside are very dim so you can increase lightings over there.
Once again, I want to thank you for arranging everything so well.
Yours sincerely,
xxx
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...olite and cleaned the mess immediately. Also to my surprise, I was thrilled when I s...
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Line 6, column 306, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
...d when I saw that your hotel managed to get best music band which was like the cherry on...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71942125097 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1342463807 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8181818182 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252379337959 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100118455839 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063426833806 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138601560861 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803534742865 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.