Dear Dave,
I am one of the volunteers in your organisation working in the old-age department. I would like to inform you that will not be able to continue serving your organisation from 20th June 2018.
I am involved in helping older people with different activities such as morning and evening walks, having food, changing clothes. Moreover, also provided help to the disabled children with indoor and outdoor activities. My schedule is 12:00 PM to 8:00 PM from Monday to Thursday and 10:00 AM to 8:00 AM on Saturdays.
My reason for not continuing this work is that I have received call letter for admission in Xavier University in London. I will be required to join the college on 25th June 2018. I was waiting for this call letter for last four months. Though I am very glad working for older people and disabled children, unfortunately, due to higher studies I will need to drop this work.
As I have always felt happy and satisfied helping in this organisation, However, leaving this work is more painful and sad.
Fortunately, one of my friends is willing to take this task and I would like to recommend her. She lives just one block away and experienced in different volunteer activities especially for older people. Moreover, she has just now completed her graduation and will be available for one year.
I hope you will consider her profile in my place.
Yours sincerely,
xxx
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
... months while serving your organisation.Though, I am very glad working for older peopl...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, while, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75954198473 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83524080256 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2328427608 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9230769231 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19989781481 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072596176291 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562385476397 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108888117772 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632855095581 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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