You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged.
Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter
• Inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled.
• Describe your suitcase and what happened to it.
• Explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase.
Dear Sir,
My name is Sandip and I am writing this letter to complain about the damaged luggage that delivered when I used your travel service during recent trip to Pune from Rajkot.
I was on one of your buses, the one which departs daily from Rajkot at 7 pm. On driver’s insistence, I kept my bag, which used to be a brand new bag from Wilcard, in the luggage cabin. It is extremely difficult to move around the holdall because the handle is broken. Even the zip on the bag was torn apart when the suitcase was handed back at the destination. It looks like it was not placed properly, thus it might have stuck on some hooks. I believe it was handled very irresponsibly, even after guaranteed the safety of the baggage.
I would really appreciate if you could provide full compensation for the damage as it is torn in a way that it is completely useless now. Besides, company has explicitly mentioned on the ticket about the full responsibility of luggage.
I look forward to hearing from you immediately.
Yours Sincerely,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tely. Yours Sincerely, Sandip Ramani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, really, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71505376344 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70912799516 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4296108892 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7272727273 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167660327811 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562998233601 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046186444617 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839583887013 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357043463281 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.