The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.
The given chart illustrates the information about the usage of internet by different age groups given in 6 categories. The data is calibrated in per centum.
It can be seen that only news has maximum popularity among all age groups. At least 70% of people use internet to get news. In addition to this, 81% of teens play online games. It drop to 54% in 20s and 37% in 30s then keep on decreasing till 60s upto 25%. Online games are increased by 7% in age group of above 70s. Moreover, downloads activity display a similar trend to internet games, but they are less popular in general and declined markebly with people over age 40. Only 6% of people over 70 download it.
Moving further, maximum research related product has been done by people of 40s. Which is 83%. Teens do not do any research. Apart from this, buying a product a product online in equally popular with all internet user except those at either end of age scale : teens and internet users of age 70 or older. Furthermore, searching for people online is done done by between one quarter and one third of people sending on age, except for teenagers who make 5 searches out of total 100
- The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 67
- The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003 All figures in percentage 83
- The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes. 73
- The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes. 73
- The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'drops'?
Suggestion: drops
...his, 81% of teens play online games. It drop to 54% in 20s and 37% in 30s then keep ...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...product has been done by people of 40s. Which is 83%. Teens do not do any research. A...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a product'.
Suggestion: a product
...o any research. Apart from this, buying a product a product online in equally popular with all inte...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: done
...hermore, searching for people online is done done by between one quarter and one third of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, then, third, apart from, at least, except for, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53110047847 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36877361421 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655502392344 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.562159509 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6428571429 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13265550357 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040130404807 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507462168439 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100927730363 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360579334829 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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