Do you agree newspapers will die out in the future?
Nowadays,many think that newspapers are going to die out because of rapid progress in technology. However,I do not totally agree with this opinion.Since,modern technology has many benefits and drawbacks that influence people's lives seriously.
Firstly, it would be better to disclose pros and cons of newspapers. Newspapers are widespread all over the world since they were first published. The goal of publishment is to report news in order to inform and alert people in emergency and other cases. While,some cashed in on advantages of mass-media and made some people to trust in wrong information. Newspapers have been considered the moost benefitial means of media among the old generation even though internet has already exceeded them. Majority of old people are not inclined to utilise the internet to become aware of news because it has a lot of distractors. So, newspapers are considered more effective way of reporting news in comparison with new technological opportunities.
Turning to the other side of argument,the internet also has some advantages which are the main reason for being used to a large extenet. First of all,internet gives us opportunities to find news that are concerned people and eliminate unneeded information. Besides,it is possible to follow all newspapers online by computers and tablets instead of splashing out on them.
In conclusion, it is evident that new coming generation is attached to the internet thoroughly therefore future of newspapers is in danger. After years newspapers might completely disappear because of the lack attention to the outmoded media.
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