Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is a case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
People used to spend less and wisely on clothing in the past whereas it is widely popular to dress up in trendy outfits these days. In my opinion, improved living standards and advertisements play key role in influencing personal choices of clothes. Overspending on clothing could have a serious implication on finance, so it is acceptable buy branded clothes as long as it is in budget.
To begin with, people always try to adapt to the changes in the culture and the society, so that they do not feel alienated from the community. Same applies to outfit, when a group of individual start to purchase branded clothes, rest of the crowd start following the same. At the same time, living standard has improved a lot compared to the past when people were not fortunate enough to afford expensive attires. Now that individuals are earning well, they love to spend money on clothing because it has become the symbol of status. For example, an average individual is spending almost one third of his earning only on branded clothes.
Obviously, it is not wise to spend a huge part of income on clothes because it can put enormous pressure on one’s finances, which can have serious consequence in the long run. Besides, the same amount, which is being spent on clothes, can be utilized in more significant aspects of life, such as health care and education. Although, it is acceptable to buy expensive outfits to certain extent as long as it is within budget, it is good to examine own financial condition instead of following bling vogue trends.
In Conclusion, though quality of life has improved and people are earning well, it wise to stick to budget rather than falling in to marketing traps. So that same money can be used to create secure and meaningful life.
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- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To What extent do you agree? 84
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- A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem, explain what happened to you in the past, and sug 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wises'?
Suggestion: wises
...mproved and people are earning well, it wise to stick to budget rather than falling ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, third, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8262295082 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62415136459 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5960976158 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0597592152819 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216425082719 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0165796152102 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0346371494187 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013913081047 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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