Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is a case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
People used to spend less and wisely on clothing in the past whereas it is widely popular to dress up in trendy outfits these days. In my opinion, improved living standards and advertisements play key role in influencing personal choices of clothes. Overspending on clothing could have a serious implication on finance, so it is only acceptable to buy branded clothes as long as it is in budget.
To begin with, there are two main reason behind why folks love to wear stylish clothes. Firstly, people always try to adapt to the changes in the culture and the society, so that they do not feel alienated from the community. Same applies to outfit, when a group of individual start to purchase branded clothes, rest of the crowd start following the same. Secondly, living standard has improved a lot compared to the past when people were not fortunate enough to afford expensive attires. Now that individuals are earning well, they love to spend money on clothing because it has become the symbol of status. For example, an average individual is spending almost one third of his earning only on branded clothes.
Obviously, it is not wise to spend a huge part of income on clothes because it can put enormous pressure on one’s finances, which can have serious consequence in the long run. Besides, the same amount, which is being spent on clothes, can be utilized in more significant aspects of life, such as health care and education. Although, it is acceptable to buy expensive outfits to certain extent as long as it is within budget, it is good to examine own financial condition instead of following bling vogue trends. Else, one may have to witness serious financial crisis.
In Conclusion, though quality of life has improved and people are earning well, it is logical to stick to budget rather than falling in to marketing traps. So that same money can be used to create secure and meaningful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8506097561 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60256410139 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7190269869 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.066666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0771156548677 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260819200293 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271304183814 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423107965492 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285901565386 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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