Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and tjey do not change their habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you preffer? Explain why.
"The Maturity is going to ask you one day, where was your Youth." This is a proverb from the Croatian language, literally translated into English. It is meant to motivate young people to live their lives without fear and with great courage so that they do not regret missed opportunities later in life. Even though the world is full of adventures, there are people who like to stay in their comfort zone, with same routines and habits. This essay is going to present both of these two approaches to life.
To a lot of people, life without new experiences does not have any sense. After months of hard work, you are getting forward to get time off, to do something that is not related to your usual day: spa-weekend or trip to an exotic destination. To further explain, the idea of you doing something unusual and exciting is keeping you motivated to achieve your goals in personal or business life. Taking my friend as an example, his work is almost always flawless and he has great results in a company where he is employed. He loves his job as an industrial engineer, but he loves to travel even more; therefore, to keep him on track, he rewards himself with a trip every time he achieves his goals. In this example, it is easy to see how new experiences can give motivation to work or even a meaning to one individual life.
On the other hand, there are people who like to play as safe as they can in life. For some of us, doing same things for a month to month means that we have succeeded in life. This is primarily because of a sense of safety. Consider that someone had a rough past, in which a lot of things had happened that harmed one's emotions and the mental health; therefore, for this person, having a calm see to sail is the best thing that can happen. Moreover, there are also groups of people who are raised in such manner, with lack of interest in exploring and learning other that is not related to their way of living and culture. Those are people who come from rural and isolated areas, who had not had any chance to perceive different culture, points of view and beliefs.
After a discussion of both sides, enjoying the change and experiencing new things is a more favourable position to me. We should enjoy life and everything the life brings to us.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52163461538 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42076617344 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540865384615 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9880889034 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262452012589 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781200585774 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625365864771 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148704425593 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647166583146 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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