The graph below shows average yearly rainfall in Moscow and Sanfrancisco, measured in millimeters
The barchart indicates the average yearly rainfall in Moscow and Sanfrancisco measured in millimeters.
Overall, the average yearly rainfall in Moscow is high in winter and in Sanfrancisco is high in winter.
The average yearly rainfall in Moscow and Sanfrancisco is difference in six months first. In January and February the average of rainfall in Moscow was smaller than Sanfrancisco( 60 and 58) meanwhile Sanfrancisco had a higher number of yearly rainfall than Moscow(118 in both of two months). In March, April, May and June, the average yearly rainfall of Moscow declined steadily(48 in March,38 in April) and then jumped sharply ( over 60 in May, 87 in June). However the average yearly rainfall in Sanfrancisco fell rapidly ( over 80, 39, 28 and 5).
Six months after, the average yearly rainfall in Moscow decreased and increased constant, the was downward(82 in July, 83 in August, 62 in September,78 in October, 56 in November and 48 in December). The average yearly rainfall in Sanfrancisco wwas much lower in Mosco, few month have no rain( July, August). In September, November, December the average yearly rainfall in Sanfrancisco had upwward trend with 5 in September,35 in October,80 in November and 118 in December.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arch,38 in April and then jumped sharply over 60 in May, 87 in June. However the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ed sharply over 60 in May, 87 in June. However the average yearly rainfall in Sanfranc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly rainfall in Sanfrancisco fell rapidly over 80, 39, 28 and 5. Six months after...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'few months'.
Suggestion: few months
... Sanfrancisco wwas much lower in Mosco, few month have no rain July, August. In September...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13567839196 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94060459342 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477386934673 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8583656498 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453250100449 0.215688989381 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251364510801 0.103423049105 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100374917891 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339444571746 0.15604864568 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858489955745 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.