You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear Vincent,
I hope you and your family are doing great. I felt really happy and pleased reading your letter, especially to know that you are now ready to take off your professional career. I being one of the closest friend to you, would like to strongly suggest to kick start your career with a decent while-collar job.
From my personal experience, you wouldn’t enjoy going to college as student’s life is very hectic and mundane which definitely is not your choice of living. Furthermore, the colleges these days are very expensive and is not under the financial range of middle-class people like us.
Moreover, I believe that at present you need to look for a job, so that you can financially support your family as it is the need of the hour. Also, with your current academic credentials, you can easily get a decent job with handsome remuneration.
Finally, knowing you so closely, I truly feel that you have excellent interpersonal and selling skills. Therefore, a job in the field of sales, such as, sales representative would be an ideal role to kick start your career.
Please write me back and let me know if you agree with my suggestion. It’s my pleasure to help you in any form. Convey my regards to Jane and your parents.
Regards,
Azhar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y to take off your professional career. I being one of the closest friend to you,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86818181818 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78815010208 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640909090909 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6799820101 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231572938434 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777613145707 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051794916131 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126269960297 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498379093065 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.