As a result electronic Inventions such us the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their healthy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In term of electronic development likes computer and television, which cause inhabitants to do little bit physical activities and it gives unpleasant effects for themselves, particularly their healthy. There are some cases make me agree with those opinion, whereas there are other reasons to say “disagree” for that.
In the modern era like now, everything is easy with high technology such as computer and television. We can update news with the great multimedia in television and we can do job in office by computer only. In the daily activity, a large of people spend their time to watching movie or updating news either, and the other people spend minority time in office just for sitting in front of computer to finishing their job. Watching television too long will cause nearsighted to everyone, and sitting too long in front of computer will affect inhabitants spend less time taking exercise, and it will reduce their healthy. In this case, I believe that technology innovation give nasty results certainly for their eye health. Moreover, this will make humans prone to disease because it rarely moves.
On the other hand, watching television will cause pleasure and entertained. In my view, it is a good way to refresh brain, especially for residents who have a lot of work. Work with computer will cause all jobs in office become either easily or quickly. I believe that it is very Important, ordinary for employees who work in big company. Reference to the result of research that watching television too long while consume multivitamin constantly will keep healthy. By the same token, according to statement of Stave Jobs, he explains that humans use computer while consume food with high protein will improve the fitness of the humans body because the brain is working perfectly with high technology. In this situation I dispute that technology will give negative effects to citizens.
In conclusion, I disagree that technology development will give depressing result for healthy because it will work properly if we use those while swallow nutrition or vitamin continually. However, I agree with the first opinion if we use the electronic too long without consume nourishing food.
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while consume multivitamin constantly will keep healthy.
while consuming multivitamins constantly will keep body healthy.
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