You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Fred,
It`s been so long since we have been together last month. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to ask your help to find me a part-time job in your city where I will move next month for studying.
My family submitted to many universities, but only the prestigious university where in your city has accepted my admission this year. The study year is already started, so I must join them immediately and catch up current cohort. I will be studying for complete one year and attending all morning lectures.
University`s fees and travel fees are already covered by my family; however, I must get a part-time job at night shift to fund my living cost and any accommodation rent. I would prefer to find a night shift to be able attending my morning lectures at university.
Please find attached my updated Resume. It has all my educational details and previous work experiences. I know that you have a lot of connections among your work network; therefore, you may distribute it with them to find a suitable job for me. You can also check with your current company in the IT department as I have an experience in this field.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 295, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...also check with your current company in the IT department as I have an experience in t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77961359089 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8523485748 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9230769231 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245944124828 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786489277513 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083902860267 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137195334506 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690193824079 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.