Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with example and relevant evidence.
Happiness, the most enjoyable feeling among human being, is a heated up subject. It is believed that pursuit of happiness is a target for human who consider it as a significant achievement. This essay will discuss, firstly, the controversial definition of happiness among people, and secondly, some key factors to reach a happiness life, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
People have different needs and goals in their life, and it is impossible to be united on only one definition of happiness. Individuals set their life plan based on personal requirement, and it differs from one to another. Although some people reach to the same level of success and wealth, they should not be at same level of happiness. For instance, there are many millionaires who do not feel happiness with their wealth and attempted to suicide; however, they are financially safe. They find their happiness in something else.
Considering that there are also a lot of factors to maintain the happiness in our life, but there are only the key factors which cannot be neglectable. These are related to maintain tha balance between the health, family and money. For example, I have a good job with a reputable international company, and good savings in my bank account. I assumed that I have reached to all my targets as well as happiness, but I realized that family is one of the factors to maintain the happiness when my father had a heart-attack suddenly and went to hospital.
To sum up, Happiness is a target for all people, but it should be well defined based on their needs considering the factors related to their life. Not only money, family and health are the main factors, but also there are many to be identified case by case based on people needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86577181208 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78551789619 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4554100258 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140270500569 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510971024743 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385092496778 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901976654804 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00851459920183 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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