Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with example and relevant evidence.
happiness in life is vital to our daily lives and it helps us get through the day and make us wake up in the morning. There is no barometer to scale how much a person is happy in that moment. However, I believe happiness is mostly misunderstood in the minds of the people and they often associate with other human feelings, which are similar in some manner. First, I will define my definition of happiness and then go on to explain the important factor to achieving the real happiness.
our brain produces different set of chemicals, when its subjected to different emotional outcomes or situations. For instance, according to medical science, winning lottery or getting lots of money, produces dopamine chemical in our brain, which creates an instant gratification to human mind. The same chemical (dopamine) is released in our brain when a person do drugs, or have sexual encounter. people often times associate such moments to happiness, whereas, these moments never last and a person become un happy after a certain period of time.
Three factors are most crucial in achieving the true happiness in life. Firstly, having loved ones around gives you contend and satisfaction in your daily routine. Secondly, having a long term goal provides you a positive perspective of the world, in addition to this, it gives you sense of purpose in life which, eventually gives you happiness. Lastly, to do a daily work keeps you occupied in your daily life and keeps the negative thoughts at bay. Thus, your daily job plays a vital role in deciding your happiness.
In conclusion, I believe instead of running to find materialistic things in life, one should consider keeping their family, work and goals close to the heart to achieve true joy of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93581081081 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64087861608 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9435275591 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219445698517 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737114438599 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604406441749 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119490816654 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684058049078 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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