Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Now these days, new trend has arrived that more people like to live in huge building. And some people avoid to buildings for many privacy matters. As I have asked, I would like to prefer to live in traditional house.
Mostly, traditional houses are big in area that is why I want to live in traditional homes. Traditional house has big room which is too much specious to live. however in skyscraper It is not like that. As compare to traditional houses buildings has small houses and small rooms which would be not much spacious. as we can adjust more equipment in traditional houses. But in building houses we may find problem to adjustment to necessary equipment. As well as we can not walk freely if living area is small.
Another most important thing is traditional houses has backyard where we can make garden. In that garden we can plant decorative plants which can make our day beautiful. Unlike building houses, it has only small balcony where we can not plant trees. And more thing is that for some houses do not have balcony. while in traditional houses, in backyard we can make pergolas where we can sit for some time for refreshing and also we can make small ponds.
Additionally, traditional houses do not have problems of neighbors we can live as we want. In contrast to this building houses have problems of neighbor majorly the complain such as do not make noise, do not make any damage to the combine wall, do not increase volume of the TV and many more. But in traditional houses we can do whatever we want. we can increase volume of the TV. we can renovate our home whenever we want. we do not have any restriction to make noise. traditional houses not need to pay for the maintenance to the secretory but in apartment we need to pay for maintenance.
In the end, It is totally depend on the person where he or she want to live. some people, they do not have a choice to where they want to live. but in my point of view traditional houses are more convenient, peaceful and specious. So I would like to there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50677506775 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55145849234 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433604336043 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8543239286 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9615384615 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1923076923 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171987627559 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681024390206 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586525111196 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123910307013 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571292787283 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.