Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of all times and other think that adult life will bring you more happiness.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Teenage plays a very important role in our life. Having a good teenage is very important in the evolution of one's character. People who had happy times during the early stages of life will mostly succeed in future. The justification would be that people will be happy only when they have education,nutrition, health care, shelter and most importantly security in the form of parents. They don't have to worry about the responsibilities.
Well there is no guarantee for the children to have pleasant childhood even when the parent are around. It will depend on the situations you are living in. I mean if you are in a war prone zone you will not be able to fulfill your basic needs itself, forget about being happy. People in Syria are the live example for these conditions. Their normal life is being disturbed, homes been damaged and people are running around the world as refugees all credit to the notorious killings in the form enemy. In these conditions the children are the one's suffering the most.
Adult life gives you the opportunity to see the world the way it is. People who never really cared in their teen years might have to take the responsibilities suddenly. Parents will be getting old and they will start depending on them in day to day life needs. You will have to save the money to fulfill those unlike in the teenage where it was vice-versa. If you are not mature enough to be on right path, it will lead to fatal circumstances in life. But taking care of the people who once protected you will give the mental satisfaction. You will have your freedom and you don't have to depend on anyone. People will start involving you in decision making and executing the plans.
I would like to conclude this with my opinion that happiness is a term which everyone want in their life. But it depends on the environment you are living in and the people you are surrounded with. As long as you do not stress yourself for the difficult situations down the road, you will always be happy. All you have to do is hold your nerves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, well, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60273972603 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58644357631 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517808219178 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1172238535 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0434782609 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8695652174 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26086956522 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252200449411 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826097147871 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398732646539 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159852204476 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445654427917 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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