Cities are now expanding. The government should make better public transport or should build more roads to facilitate car ownership?
The phenomenon of cities became large than before and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that creating more roads is highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that making better network for the public transportation can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin whit, there are various reasons to develop network for public transport by the government for large cities. At first, more roads for cars make the traffic roughly and easier. However, the government should encourage people to use public transportation due to its disadvantages. For example, there are many negative effects whit travelling whit personal cars such as producing greenhouse gases and crowded highways.
In addition, repairing and creating roads for cars make the travels safer. But, it cannot help solve the governmental issues such as environmental pollutions.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the facilities for expanded cities, I profoundly believe that the benefits of advanced public transportation are more important than more roads to facilitate car ownership.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 190.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0698967292 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2783928309 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316824025761 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112524089099 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770905010127 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173521124286 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059094635996 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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