Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is so important that people choose some places or activities that are attractive to them. We have to know which place can raise our knowledge and is beneficial for us in order to not waste our time. People from each country, all around the world, like to see the museums in every new place. So I think people go visit museums for two reasons.
The most important reason is that people go to museums to become familiar with the culture of each country and city. Each nation in every continent has different cultures. Whereas culture plays a vital role in our life, It is so important to get familiar with all cultures and use them in our personal lives if they are beneficial for us. For example, we have a little, local museum in Astara city, My hometown in Iran, that exposes antic local clothes and weapons of our armies, some antic and new food that is used in our city, and three sculptures of our Turkish poets who lived and died in Astara. Last month, two of my friends that live in Tehran and are my university classmates, came to Astara and I suggested them to visit our museum. They did not believe that Astara had a military center in 100 years ago. Also, they tasted some of our local food and immediately ordered some of them. They were very delicious. In addition, I translated a poem of our poets to Farsi for them, and they were amazed so much. After this, they decided to go to the museums of every city they will travel. This experience taught me that other cultures might be very interesting for people.
Another reason is that individuals go visit the museums to understand some unknown facts about the history of our ancestors that could increase their knowledge. We all know Pyramids in Egypt, and when thinking about it and difficulty of its building, absolutely, it wonder us. But there are some places that we are not familiar with them and their histories. For instance, my cousin graduated From Madrid University of Spain three years ago. He always tells me about his memories in Spain and his traveling to all the cities of there. One day that he was in our home, TV was showing a documentary about caves. My cousin remembered one of his travels to see a cave that known as a museum. He told me about some inscriptions and signs on the cave wall which is similar to signs of some caves in other countries that recently is known as our ancestors’ alphabet. This was very very amazing for me and was a fact that I never heard, so I did some research about it. As you can see these unknown facts could increase our knowledge about some facts that were hidden for us.
In sum, I think museums are places that are very beneficial for people. Not only people could get familiar with other cultures but also they will improve their general information about history. Personally, I believe that museums can be named as “The University of Culture and History of World.”
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'wonders'?
Suggestion: wonders
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: very
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 43.0788530466 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57743785851 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43123683628 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445506692161 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4085057887 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6785714286 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.67857142857 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184839302478 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603987761237 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654254991586 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136122283566 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044226073889 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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