TPO 50 integrated
The author in the reading passage holds that there are several problems of sending humans to Mars, which the lecturer in the lecture expresses an opposite opinion.
To begin with, the author claims that the round-trip to the Mars can last at least two years, which makes it hard to carry enough supplies of food, water and oxygen due to limited cargo capacity of spaceships. However, the lecturer refutes that this problem can be perfectly solved by conducting hydroponics, a method of growing plant in water rather than in soil. This allows astronauts to cultivate food crop in spaceship that can not only serve as meals but also recycle waste water and convert it into clean water vapor for drinking. In addition, these plants also absorb CO2 as well as release oxygen during the photosynthesis.
Moreover, the author believes that spending such a long time in the zero-gravity environment is harmful to human body, as it is likely to decrease muscle mass and lower bone density. On the contrary, the lecturer rebuts that it can be prevented by learning necessary technics, since many astronauts had already lived in zero-gravity environment for several months in the space station in last few decades. For example, doing regular exercise and taking vitamins prevent astronauts from losing muscle mass and reducing bone density.
Finally, the author puts forward that the radiation emitted by the Sun is extremely dangerous. Instead, the lecturer retorts that the radiation does not remain at such a high level all the time but occurs occasionally. This means that under most circumstances, astronauts can do normal business, and they are able to stay in a small shelter that does not add much weight to the spaceship, once the radiation, which can be monitored by special instruments, becomes radical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, moreover, so, well, at least, for example, in addition, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11447811448 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67086361565 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3463053454 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.090909091 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06452816374 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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