Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?
Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
There is no doubt that foreign films more populer than local films. Government have solution for this problem.
There are various reasons why foreign films popular than local films. Firstly, domestically films which do not have spectacularly action make attendances are not satisfy. Almost all famous films on the world have graet budget, government invest big budget for movie industry. Secondly, foreign films converge many famous actors attract attendences. Usually, the film which have many famous actors attract lots of attendences. We can not deny that the attract of famous actors lead to the film is more popular. So easy to find out the reason explain why foreign films more popular than local films.
With my opinion, government need have solutions to promote local film industry. Government should invest more budget for local film industry. Hollywood which is one of the most icon for film industry on the world is invested huge budget every year by government. Government should open school for training actor, actor who have good skill is more popular than one. Local films have famous actor will attract many attendences. Government should stimulate invest in domestically film industry.
In conclusion, i really like romantic films of my countries, local film is easy for sympathetic and absorb. It is depend on your mind you could see local film or foreign films
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, mind you, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20179372197 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50038505752 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515695067265 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9617280874 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2352941176 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1176470588 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40937237568 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178892705905 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097580137469 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302376666882 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175898094112 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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