Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial. However, most make no effort to do so.
Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
Although some are concerned with the preservation of natural environment, many seem to be reluctant to behave accordingly. In my opinion, this is happening because of the lack of insight of the people to predict the forthcoming harmful consequences; and there are few measures that can be adopted to help our environment.
Firstly, the reason which makes people effortless for protecting the natural environment is that they appear to be extremely careless not only for themselves but also to their surroundings. Consequently, the environment is getting more and more polluted by their intentional and unintentional activities such as smoking in the public places and throwing rubbish everywhere. Secondly, to meet up the demands of growing population as well as making the businesses more profitable, urbanization and industrialization seem to become unavoidable to some extent, without considering much about the negative impacts of those on the environment. So, the lame excuses are being delivered that to keep pace with the time and demands we should compromise the facts of the environmental issues.
There are two effective solutions that can help our surroundings to a large extent. First of all, people need to be persuaded to become aware of the negative consequences of the polluted environment by inaugurating extensive social campaigning as well as by broadcasting TV commercials. Additionally, a reward programme can be initiated to encourage the public awareness of the extraordinary contributor to the environment. Therefore, if this process of persuasion fails, the government can issue a few laws. In my country, for instance, since the loose plastic carrying bags are prohibited, the country’s environment became free from this non-degradable rubbish.
In conclusion, while individual awareness is the first and foremost for helping to build a good environment, the governments' collaboration is also necessary to conserve the healthy natural environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...elping to build a good environment, the governments collaboration is also necessary to cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62666666667 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45482593226 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5706326724 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0833333333 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155770646315 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534278958057 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314404539695 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914041583685 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343332542942 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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