Leaders and directors in organizations are often older people. Some people say that younger people could be leaders. Do you agree or disagree?
There has always been a controversy as regards whether higher positions should be handled by youngsters or whether they should be undertook by senior leaders. From my point of view, while I agree that management should be encouraged to be led by elderly people, I also agree that younger citizen should hold these positions for the following reasons.
On the one hand, young people are likely to be active to access modern technologies, creative and open-minded. According to an article published by Harvard Business Review, 44% of young leaders possess comprehensive leadership qualities such as motivation for staff, negotiation skills and so forth whereas 20% of the old own these factors. As a result, there are breakthrough ideas are likely to create. Secondly, young managers tend to instruct and motivate inspiration for employee rather than elderly leaders who put a high pressure on their staff. Therefore, some countries elect youngsters to become a leader for a company, a corporation or even a country such as New Zealand which is led by a 37-year-old president.
On the other hand, it is irrefutable that people who are older have more experience than the remainders. The reason is that they have a long period of time to accumulate golden knowledge and skills for their current positions. FPT corporation; for instance; some leaders are over 60 years old, but by virtue of their profound know-how in their major, they make a great contribution to FPT company. Furthermore, another striking reason is that people who are not old enough are likely to receive lack of confidence in their management for their organizations. This leads them to non-cooperation of subordinates with their leaders.
In conclusion, while I agree that leaders and directors in some organizations should be handled by elderly people, I also believe that they should be undertook by younger people for the aforementioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...rs. The reason is that they have a long period of time to accumulate golden knowledge and skil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, as regards, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21935483871 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00676310168 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5784913566 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222795768332 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766214383518 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822361490651 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159308162044 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097009932775 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.