Some people think that movies should be based on social stigma while others believe that it should be based on real life heros. Discuss both views and opinion.
Movies inspire us, challenge our assumption,change our views, sometimes break our heart to left our soul, and yes teach us life lesson.Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever.For instance the given topic asserts that shoud the movie are totally deals in these days on : socal stigma or real life heros? Through the essay, I shall explore the dimensions of the topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On the one side, there is a group of people who believe that more movies based on the social stigma. It is a process by which the reactions of others spoils normal identity. They strengthen their view by claiming that some movies shows the physical disabilities of a person, he or she can be deaf, dumb and have some other problems. They face a pleathora of impediments in a society, and few are taunting them but they still calm and get a suceess well in their life. The main reason for believing this, the discrimination among the masses for instance, skin colour and there are lot of restrictions on them such as they do not use washrooms and talk with other people. Furthermore , relegion is the other reason in which most of the movies showcases where one person cannot enter the temple and places of the others relegions as well as eat together them.
Contary to this, it is believed by few that real life heros sets a good epitome in industry because the stories are related to their life style and struggle So, they are more inspirational movies.
There are umpteen movies that presents the biopick of a person. To exemplify, a biography film on Harjeet singh, who is a indian professional field hockey player realeases on may 2018 named as a 'Harjeeta', and this movie
revealed that he belongs to a poor family, due to a family issues he could not bought a hockey at that time but in reality his competitive spirit made him a renowned player of a international team.So, this movie ignites the full of encouragement and creativity in youth.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is a no single conclusion still, I take this an effective clap require the use of hands.So, both types of movies have own importance and equal share in cinema industry because these always represent the daily issues as well as real stories of a person that are common and motivational.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79661016949 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75962639028 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569007263923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.471477866 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.083333333 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4166666667 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221465731073 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779976573711 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666229358231 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859740702924 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587132126005 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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