You are planning to go on a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.
• Why you need a holiday.
• Your holiday plans.
• Why you need your friend to join with you.
Dear Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace. It’s been a long since we hang out the last time. So, I was thinking to take a trip together.
Lately, I was completely occupied with work and emotionally drained from the divorce I had in October. In order to re-energize myself and take a break from the routine, I’ve decided to take a vacation to Thailand, which offers great value for money due to low currency conversion rate. Thus, it is quite crucial for me to take step back and reevaluate my life by taking a vacation.
Nevertheless, I took liberty to outline few places in Thailand which are the best to visit at this time of the year. Starting with Pattaya, where the main attractions are beaches and ancient Buddhist temples, then to Phuket for two days before travelling to Bangkok as our last stop in the trip. Overall, it is about a week that we’re going to spend.
Why don’t you join with me on this adventure? This will be a great opportunity for us to re-live our old college days. Besides, I could really use you tour management skills and your emotional support through this bad phase of life.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50344452617 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683257918552 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.298365986 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146702675943 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522732391388 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702581159247 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900926797388 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670490363248 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.