How do you think the crime would reduce – with harsher punishments or moral teachings? Discuss both the views and take a stand?
There is always a debate whether correct values or stick punishments, which is more appropriate to reduce crime rate and save the society. I believe that both are equally significant to alleviate crime and depend on several factors but moral values are vital to protect society and citizen. This essay will discuss both in detail and thus lead a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, undoubtedly, harsher punishment of any crime develops a fear of consequence in people and that fear stop them to commit crime. For example, the UAE has the stickiest punishments for all crimes and that’s why the UAE has the least crime rate in the world. These harsh punishments help government to protect society and nation from more criminals and innocent people also feel there. Therefore, harsher punishments and law aid to reduce crime by cultivating fear of consequences of the heinous crimes.
On the flip side, moral values play an enormous role to alleviate the crime, as people generally imitate and behave and act upon accordingly, what they have learned from their parents and society in their childhood. It’s parents and schools’ responsibility to teach a child moral values from a tender age. For instance, Japan has the second country which has the least crime rate because Japanese pay more attention to teach their children moral values. Thus, moral values not only help to reduce crimes, but also teach about humanity.
In conclusion, both harsher punishments and moral values are helpful to reduce crime in the world and depend on degree of crime as some crime must have strict punishments, where some crimes required to teach people moral values. In my opinion, moral values should be included as a part of the education system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uded as a part of the education system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11805555556 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64877534013 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.175921743 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279183266389 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10390791822 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630668465555 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179726531583 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442586672612 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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