The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by personal department at a major company. The survey was the carried out on two groups of workers.those aged from 18 to 30 and those aged 45 to 60 and shows the factor affecting their work performance?
The given layout depicts the information about survey conducted. By a major company.The 10 factors affecting on their work performance in 2 age groups. The data is calibrated in percentum.which is clearly and coherently represented.
It, can be seen that. The first factor of their work performance is team spirit, in that fector each affects of 18-30 and 45-60 age groups worker with 60% affects on work performance, apart from all this factor of chance for personal development in that fector has been increased young age group as compare to 45-60 age workers so there for 18-30 age group have more chance for improve personal development, furthermore in age group of 45-60 affects on worker performance in factors of relaxed ki environment, competent boss and job security has been 32%,42% and 20% respectively.
As far as trend is concerned that, fector of respect from colleagues
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- Many countries women no longer the need to get married. Some believe that this is Because women are able to earn their own income and there for do not require financial security. That marriage can. Bring to what extend do u agree? 78
- The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by personal department at a major company. The survey was the carried out on two groups of workers.those aged from 18 to 30 and those aged 45 to 60 and shows the factor affecting their work pe 56
- The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by personal department at a major company. The survey was the carried out on two groups of workers.those aged from 18 to 30 and those aged 45 to 60 and shows the factor affecting their work pe 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, apart from, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11724137931 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.970933306 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 185.722612756 43.030603864 432% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338047873121 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107982219726 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122574100482 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173311804018 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1107241777 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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