Having more money and less free time is better than earning less
money and having more free time.
In this modern era reaching the balance between time and money is always been a debate. Section of society considered a life better when wealthier and less leisure time rather than having abundant of free time with empty pockets and others hold the different belief. This essay is an attempt to discuss both viewpoints before coming to a conclusion
To begin with, it has been observed that one cannot enjoy time with empty pockets, moreover money is the medium to convert free time in to leisure, for instance people with more money at their dispensable can go to International tours and enjoy vacations more than those with less money as the latter keep monitoring the expenses thus remain stress during holidays, therefore quality of free time overweighs the quantity of time.
Secondly, “empty mind is devil's home” that means if a person has more unused time then he or she may get into activities which would affect the individual characteristics, drug consumption is one of such example which could have negative results on both the person as well society as a whole, suggesting it's better to have less free time and contribute to society with our hard work and leads to the positive development.
On the contrary, there is a situation which supports the other views. To exemplify, let's discuss a family where everybody earns a lot of money however they don't have time to spend with their families. Children of this category of people feel lonely and disturb even at home which affects the performance in the exam. In the madding race of earning more, these parents forget to nurture sentiments of the family members, resulting in family issues.
After analyzing both aspects, it can be concluded that though money and time are crucial for the living, however, been wealthy one can have good living standards by merely making a conscious effort to spend quality time with family even if in low amount.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53081150201 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595679012346 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.674049146 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.666666667 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2222222222 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439201490878 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155553380956 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112866073738 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230810379833 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712991406545 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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