You are looking for an apartment to rent in a certain neighborhood.
Write a letter to a friend who lives in that neighborhood. In your letter
- explain why you want to live in that neighborhood.
- describe the type of apartment you are looking for.
- ask your friend to help you find an apartment.
Dear John,
It's been a long time since we last met. Hope you are doing good!
I heard that you have moved to a new neighborhood in Des Plaines, Illinois. I am actually writing to inform you that I'm also planning to switch my apartment and have shortlisted your society for the same. I have been to your society only once to drop off a colleague who also lives there. I found the area to be well-maintained, beautiful, and only a 10-minute drive away from my office. I have also heard the rents there are a lot cheaper than my current society in Buffalo Group.
I am looking for a one-bedroom apartment, preferably to be shared by one more person, as I am currently saving to fund my higher studies. As you know, I met with an accident last month and still recovering, I would prefer a first floor apartment. This would spare me the trouble of climbing up and down the stairs with my healing leg.
I would really appreciate if you could help me find an apartment in your society, either by contacting your leasing office or asking a friend for any vacancy. Also, If you are free this Saturday, I can come over and we can hunt for the apartment together.
Thank you in advance and look forward to hearing back from you.
Best Regards,
Paul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... am actually writing to inform you that Im also planning to switch my apartment an...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... shortlisted your society for the same. I have been to your society only once to ...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...p off a colleague who also lives there. I found the area to be well-maintained, b...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a 10-minute drive away from my office. I have also heard the rents there are a l...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my current society in Buffalo Group. I am looking for a one-bedroom apartment,...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, look, really, so, still, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49344978166 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5558799391 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628820960699 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.900704457 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1538461538 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31185266192 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940712818449 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861847263904 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158779285596 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777852500341 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.