The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the productionof the silk cloth.

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The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the productionof the silk cloth.

The diagrams illustrates the stages in the life of a silkworm and the process of producing silk cloth. It is a clear and coherent.
There are four main stages in the life cycle of the silkworm ; from eggs to adult moth. The process of silk cloth production involves aix steps , from silkworm cocoon to silk material.
At te first stage in the cycle of a silkworm, the moth lays its eggs. Around twn days later , silkworm larva hatch from the eggs , these larve feed on mulbery leaves. Then after four to six weeks , the larve become covered in the silk thread , and it takes between three to eight days for a full cocoon to be produced.
For a silkcloth production , a cocoon is a first selected and then boiled in water. After boiling , the silk thread that makes up the cocoon is unwounded , and then several strond are twisted together . At the fifth an sixth stages in the process , the thread can either be dyed and thwn woven into silk fabric , or it can be woven first and then dyed subsequently.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The diagrams illustrates the stages in the life of a silkworm an...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...silk cloth production involves aix steps , from silkworm cocoon to silk material. ...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oth lays its eggs. Around twn days later , silkworm larva hatch from the eggs , th...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ter , silkworm larva hatch from the eggs , these larve feed on mulbery leaves. The...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ery leaves. Then after four to six weeks , the larve become covered in the silk th...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... larve become covered in the silk thread , and it takes between three to eight day...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...be produced. For a silkcloth production , a cocoon is a first selected and then b...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and then boiled in water. After boiling , the silk thread that makes up the cocoo...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ad that makes up the cocoon is unwounded , and then several strond are twisted tog...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...then several strond are twisted together . At the fifth an sixth stages in the pro...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ond are twisted together . At the fifth an sixth stages in the process , the threa...
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Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the fifth an sixth stages in the process , the thread can either be dyed and thwn ...
^^
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... be dyed and thwn woven into silk fabric , or it can be woven first and then dyed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49723756906 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30260606366 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8033965824 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314955684857 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138575850261 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151553980266 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24815272928 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150665557796 0.0819641961636 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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