Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantage of throwway society outweigh any possible advantages.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously he has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungle to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that is the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any advantage of adapting new things? Through this, i shall explore the dimension of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that benefits outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for this could be that man who has adapted new things actually adapts new technology or better lifestyle. As he doesn't need to reliable on old technology. The good epitome of this is modern ways of communication like mobile phones, internet, emails et cetera. Earlier man was relied on mails, telegram, pagers. But, now quick responses from receivers are actually possible. Another similar advancements related to this is advance security system which provides us with 24 hours surveillance. As seen that number of incidents such as robbery, burglary are minimised now.
contrary to this, there are opposing views to this, which are actual concern of today's world. As this technology is actually making this planet inhabitable. As multiple habitates are destroyed by this especially aves and animals when come in contact with radio-waves and by eating chemical treated plants respectively. Infact these has resulted in pollution. As these resources take longer time to decompose.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, i believe that there is no single conclusion. Still there are some policies which helps us to control this. And that could be three R's that is Reduce, Recycle and Reuse. For this, Government must make policies to implement this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pts new technology or better lifestyle. As he doesnt need to reliable on old techn...
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...w technology or better lifestyle. As he doesnt need to reliable on old technology. The...
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...s robbery, burglary are minimised now. contrary to this, there are opposing views to th...
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...ich are actual concern of todays world. As this technology is actually making this...
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...Infact these has resulted in pollution. As these resources take longer time to dec...
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...evertheless, weighing both the options, i believe that there is no single conclus...
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Suggestion: Still,
...eve that there is no single conclusion. Still there are some policies which helps us ...
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...his. And that could be three Rs that is Reduce, Recycle and Reuse. For this, Governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19127516779 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84042711842 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640939597315 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2008812506 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1904761905 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101737373097 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281830875626 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710867808363 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601860847209 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607068816271 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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