In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks.Does this kind of accommodation have more advantage or disadvantages.
in the modern society with many developments happening,the way people live also got changed to apartment blocks instead of individual houses. However, I strongly think that this changes is beneficial to the families rather than staying in the independent houses.Further, the essay lists out the advantages and disadvantages of the staying in apartment.
First and foremost, life in the flats would be very serene and relax with out any unnecessary sounds, children’s noises.
As there are separate places for car parking, play ground and function halls for any function.Thus the disturbance will not reach to the people who live in the flats. This would actually encourage anyone to stay as everyone will be tired by the time they reach home and flats are good place for the relaxation.
Secondly, the people in the apartments form a group and organise kitty parties where they dance, laugh and perform action and conduct games during boring weekends.These society groups conduct trips and other social activities. For e.g. in the apartment where I stay, the money was collected during the recent floods in Bangalore and was given to needy .
On the other hand, staying in apartments also comes with problems like the burglars robbing and other crimes. Although, tight security is present, people come in disguise and tend to target the isolated people like elderly people or children.This may some time result in the serious consequences like death of the families staying.
To conclude, there are more advantages when compared with disadvantages based on the points listed.above. I do also personally believe staying in apartment is good and entertaining which gives peace during weekdays and entertainment during week ends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, e.g., first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38545454545 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90472847096 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9013007944 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.636363636 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149286841123 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530215043378 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320511168506 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667529853217 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392017311096 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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