The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth
The given layout reveal the information about by the lifecycle of silkworm and produce of silk cloth. It is a clear and coherent representation
To begin with, In the lifecycle of the silkworm,the moth produce the eggs then lays the eggs.After ten days silkworm larva cracked their eggs and they feed their mulbeery leaf than 4-6 weekslarva were covered their silk thread next 3-8 days they were completed their cocoon to be produced.
Nextly,for produce of silk cloth first step to select their cocoon;and mixed with water after the cocoon near about 300-900 meter distance and then After the fifth and sixth stage in the process Furthermore,the thread can either be waven and then dyed into silk fabric,orit can be dyed fisrt and then waven sebsequently.
In which diagram were two process; first lifecycle of silkworm and second is production of silk cloth Moreover, in the first process involves five steps and second process involves six steps, from silkworm cocoon to silk material.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1226993865 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58785194336 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.108807317 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.75 112.824112599 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.75 22.9334400587 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 5.23603664747 291% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215993224885 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143116614997 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650457224257 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136895657446 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607134572866 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.