you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on an holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:
>how you felt about the trip and
>how did you take care of his house in his absence.
Dear John,
How are you? I hope you are doing well.
I would like to share my experience in your flat.
As you remember, this trip was important for my university assignment, as i was suppose to do an industrial training for the final semester, which i have successfully able to complete, and have submitted the reports and waiting for result.
I would like to thank you for letting me rent your flat while in your absence. This trip was a life changing experience for me as it was the first time i ever stayed alone by myself. I learned to cook, as your neighbors shared few local recipes, i couldn't resist.
As the company's office was nearby i didn't take bus i use to walk and it has brought a change in my lifestyle.
The local markets have lost's of fresh fruits to offer, and sightseeing places as amazing and the sunset near the sea is very beautiful.
Though, you were missed. I would have loved to explore the sights with you.
I would also like to share with you that every weekend i use to broom and mop the house and plant waters to your plants.
The old tap has been replaced with the new one in the sink. Your neighbors helped me to get the plumbers number. The
electricity and water bill has been paid for a month.
I couldn't help but noticed that you needed some flower plants so i thought bought them and kept it next to the aloe vera
plant, as it would compliment your room and its the simplest way for me to thank you.
I hope you don't mind the changes i have done. And i look forward to hear from you soon.
Your friend,
Jenny
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- you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on an holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:>how you felt about the trip and>how did you take care of his house in his absence. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 75, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ortant for my university assignment, as i was suppose to do an industrial trainin...
^
Line 8, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... for my university assignment, as i was suppose to do an industrial training for the fi...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...r neighbors shared few local recipes, i couldnt resist. As the companys office was n...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 37, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... As the companys office was nearby i didnt take bus i use to walk and it has broug...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 52, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...anys office was nearby i didnt take bus i use to walk and it has brought a change...
^
Line 13, column 54, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ys office was nearby i didnt take bus i use to walk and it has brought a change in ...
^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nset near the sea is very beautiful. Though, you were missed. I would have loved to...
^^^^^^
Line 19, column 56, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ke to share with you that every weekend i use to broom and mop the house and plan...
^
Line 21, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elped me to get the plumbers number. The electricity and water bill has been paid...
^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Electricity
... me to get the plumbers number. The electricity and water bill has been paid for a mont...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...er bill has been paid for a month. I couldnt help but noticed that you needed some f...
^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 66, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d that you needed some flower plants so i thought bought them and kept it next to...
^
Line 25, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t them and kept it next to the aloe vera plant, as it would compliment your room ...
^^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Plant
...m and kept it next to the aloe vera plant, as it would compliment your room and i...
^^^^^
Line 27, column 45, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...t, as it would compliment your room and its the simplest way for me to thank you. ...
^^^
Line 29, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... way for me to thank you. I hope you dont mind the changes i have done. And i lo...
^^^^
Line 29, column 52, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...dont mind the changes i have done. And i look forward to hear from you soon. ...
^
Line 29, column 67, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...hanges i have done. And i look forward to hear from you soon. Your friend, Jenny...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45238095238 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26140345322 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3023615306 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8947368421 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26315789474 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.29896907216 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292987941078 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101065520605 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705091637132 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101277532702 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698203508651 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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