More people use their own cars rather than public transport, so it is up to the government to encourage people to use buses and trains instead. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Many people believe that government should spend more money for improving the roads because they use their own cars instead of public transport. On the other hand, other people think that money should be spent for improving public transport which they use often. The question is that what kind of transport should government encourage nowadays? Personally, I cannot say exactly to which choice I tend because each of it has both advantages and disadvantages.
The first reason for encouraging public transportation is overpopulation. The amount of cars is rising dramatically. As a result of this ...
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