Some people say that cell phones improved modern life. Others believe that cell phones have caused many problems. What is your opinion? In about 150-200 words, write an essay to assert your point of view on this problem
Thanks to advanced technology, cell phones have become more and more popular in our life. From my point of view, cell phones have improved modern life. First and foremost, cell phones are a good means of communication. Thanks to them, people can keep in touch with their family, their relatives and their friends regardless of the distances. For example, only by a cell phone can you daily talk to or chat with your friends who live very far away from you. In the second place, cell phones are also good for every angle in life. Thanks to its small size, people can take them everywhere at anytime. For example, in business, people can make a deal with their countership by a video chat on a cell phone rather than have a meeting face to face. This is very convient especially for their partner living abroad. Moreover, cell phones are a necessary for people’s entertainment. To illustrate, after a busy day at work or at school, they can listen to music or play games or watch a movie, as a result, they may feel more relaxed and more energetic to many things such as doing housework, homework and so on later. Last but not least, it is estimated that almost all of the people who use cell phones are teenegers. Therefore, no one can deny that cell phones have minute by minue become an indispensable in teenegers’ routine. In reality, cell phones help teenagers to study better and better. For example, before an exam, instead of being up to all night to reivise so many lessons they had studied, teenagers can benefit greatly from cell phones. They can try on some tests on Internet, search for information they want or look into some parts in the lessons which they don’t take in too much. Seeing that the speed of Internet is very fast, students can acquire a lot of knowledge in a very convient way. While I appreciate the advantages of the cell phones, I think that they also have some drawbacks including having bad effects on people’s mind, causing some diseases and so on. All in all, it is immediately obvious that cell phones make out life more and more modern, hence people should take them into consideration to make our life better and better
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1166, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... not least, it is estimated that almost all of the people who use cell phones are teeneger...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 965.302439024 186% => OK
No of words: 385.0 196.424390244 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65714285714 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 3.73543355544 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54861452412 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 106.607317073 194% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537662337662 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 283.868780488 200% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6403306877 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3684210526 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290924853635 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109782293489 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829350014683 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290924853635 0.15604864568 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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