Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it's established beyond the doubt that always people need to travel, but they should be awared of that they need to be organized and managed any thing just for enjouying. As matter of the fact, one of the important factors in travel is to be relax and calm, if you have stress about any things, dramatically it will destroy imagination of tremendous time during the travel. After regarding different factors into consideration, I totally support this notion that tour guide is the best choice for everyone to have memorable travel. In the following, I will elaborate more details about my point of view.
The first exquisite points need to be mentioned is that the preparation for travel such as equipment, Hotel, food or even the tickent are very considerable which take long time and concentration. If people try to find the best tour guide, they will eleminate a lot of factors which waste a time. In addition, a plethora of people are of the opinion that traveling with tour is realy safe due to they have countless experience and konwledge about all aspects of travel, by way of example, the tour companies are aware about safe route or which food are suitable for people eate during the travel, also, they consider any facility for making the travel enjoyable for passengers. Thus, traveling with ture is the best way for being relax about any things which related to the travel.
There is another factor that deserves some words is that if you want to travel to new city or country, you are not familier with that palace, so, you will search for acqire the information which need more time and not vlauable the same as persone who know any things about that city or country. Hence, when people travel with tour, they will confirmed that any historical places, park, musem ets are on the best scheduel and never missed. Consequently, thanks to the tour travel, people never concern about miss any palces or lost any things, they will see any where on account of best program. According to the survey which has been conducted by experts demonstrated that people who travel with tour guide are more satisfy from their travel. A plethore of people are of the conviction that being relax are more important so trave with tour prepare any things easily.
To put it all in nutshell, by considering all of the aforementioned reasons, I totally support this idea that if you want to enjoy from your travel, the tour are convenent, so try it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'confirm'
Suggestion: confirm
...when people travel with tour, they will confirmed that any historical places, park, musem...
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Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...alces or lost any things, they will see any where on account of best program. According t...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, regarding, so, thus, in addition, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7523364486 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48145800982 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481308411215 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6153519424 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.285714286 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18952475771 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834449231618 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435261193877 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131088684965 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231672305562 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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