The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in Euros for the 16 59 age groups as per their education level

Essay topics:

The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in Euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their education level.

The given charts depict the information about the weekly salaries earn by graduates and under graduates males and females according to their age groups. The data is calibrated in Euros.

It can be seen that the maximum graduates males aged between 50-59 years are earning almost 700 Euros weekly whereas, 500 Euros are earned by under graduates men. In addition to this, the men aged between 30-39 years are almost equal in weekly earnings that is 400 Euros. Moreover, only under graduates males are earning money who are in the age of 16-19 years.

As far as the trend is concerned, the females aged between 25-50 years are receiving equal weekly salary that is 300 Euros however, the salaries of below graduates women are different in this age group. Furthermore, the females aged between 20-24 years are earning 200 Euros.

Overall, it is evident that the weekly salaries of males are higher than the females in both the categories: graduates and under graduates.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raduates males are earning money who are in the age of 16-19 years. As far as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98773006135 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33773728629 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503067484663 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.190666874 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257810202567 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116944108138 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710703282906 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148341721856 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800837381403 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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