You and your family went to a restaurant one night. The next day the whole family fell sick with food poisoning. Complain to the manager about the whole issue.
Respected sir,
I am writing to tell you about the bad experience I and my family had when we last visited your infamous restaurant.
My sister gave us a party as she got a job right after she completed her study. For celebration we chose dinner at your restaurant. Among the items we ordered salad caught my eye because it smelt funny to me, and not only that but the chicken curry also seemed to be stale. When I demanded for it to be checked, waiter said that it was the aroma of the sauce they used.
Later when we ordered desert, the ice cream was a bit sour. On asking the waiter 'again', we were turned down. The next day turned out worse for us because all of us were suffering from food poisoning. Doctor went so far as to restrict our diet to only citrus fruits and juices.
My main concern is to notify you of this happening and expecting some strict action from your end.
Your faithful
Rock.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected sir, I am writing to tell you about the bad e...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct action from your end. Your faithful Rock.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19806817696 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3405405792 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3636363636 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113430763044 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392536487646 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449385083462 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718624636853 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459464757596 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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