you recently lost your driving license and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.•How important the license is to you•Asking how he/she found it•Saying how you would love to thank him/her

Essay topics:

you recently lost your driving license and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
• How important the license is to you
• Asking how he/she found it
• Saying how you would love to thank him/her

Dear Mr. Collin,
I am Gowthami, hope you remember my name. I am the one to whom you sent the lost driving license. I would really blame myself, if I don’t write this letter you.
I drive daily to my office in car. I do not like risk to travel without driving license. So I used public transport for the last two days fetching for the time to apply duplicate license, and I lost most of the time in my travelling in these two days. But after receiving my license in the post that you sent, I really felt relaxed and happier as I don’t need to go to RTA office to apply anymore and travel through public transport till I receive it.
I remember that I have seen last while showing it as identity proof in a stall located in MGB center. I wonder how and where did you find my license and I kept on thinking it, since I received it. I whole-heartedly appreciate your helpfulness of sending my license back as everyone now a days are being self-concentrated. I would love to thank you by meeting and giving you a good treat in your nearby restaurants and also would like to know how and where you found the license. I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Hope to see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Gowthami

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...if I don't write this letter you. I drive daily to my office in car. I do n...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou. I drive daily to my office in car. I do not like risk to travel without driv...
^
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...sent, I really felt relaxed and happier as I don't need to go to RTA office t...
^^
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pt on thinking it, since I received it. I whole-heartedly appreciate your helpful...
^
Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... of sending my license back as everyone now a days are being self-concentrated. I would lo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...sending my license back as everyone now a days are being self-concentrated. I would lo...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...now a days are being self-concentrated. I would love to thank you by meeting and ...
^
Line 4, column 480, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ow how and where you found the license. I will be looking forward to hearing from...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35371179039 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60182133636 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589519650655 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5119346603 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2142857143 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346104061579 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116018086757 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978882767777 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238336848589 0.12726935374 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116860541503 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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