Do you agree or disagree the following statement？The rapid growth cities today's should have a positive effect of the development of the society.
Our generation is experiencing a relatively modern and developed society than our elder generation, urbanization plays an important role during the development of society. Thus, some people argue that what urbanization brings us is all positive, however, I cannot agree with that. First, we have to acknowledge that education and healthcare are improved through urbanization. Children from remote area have chances to go to school and the ill can get better treatment after they move into city. However, has the problem of education and healthcare been really solved? The answer is of course not, because of the limit of educational and medical resources and high expenses. Also, this kind of urbanization directly aggravates the unbalanced distribution of resources. Second, the more people move into cities, the less people will work on agriculture and farming, which means the price of living supplies will increase. In addition, there will be a great growth of labor in cities, what’s worse, some people will meet unemployment. The conflict between higher living expense and low income may rise the some bad behaviors even crimes, which may retrogress our society. Further, the capacity of a city is not endless, just like we always say that the earth can hold up to 6 billion people. If the growth cities exceeds the natural law, there will be too much burden on our environment and a series of pollution, global warming, et al. will appear.
However, from the view of the development of our history, the positive influence of urbanization should not be ignored. For example, the prosperity of culture, the progress of knowledge and so on. People from different culture and different educational background gathered through urbanization, the conversation among them opens a new world for them each other.
Overall, the positive effect of urbanization cannot be neglected, while the negative influence should alarm people to have a long-term plan. Anyway, if people have the awareness of there is an end-up of urbanization, our society will be better and better.
- TPO-24 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples 60
- Do you agree or disagree the following statement The rapid growth cities today s should have a positive effect of the development of the society 48
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 815, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
..., the more people move into cities, the less people will work on agriculture and far...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ing expense and low income may rise the some bad behaviors even crimes, which may re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26506024096 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88519000794 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599397590361 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.376121594 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.823529412 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132469280223 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366153884923 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405177086298 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888302587236 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231434176432 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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