Some people say that self employment is better than working for a company or institution. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, most of the people hold the opinion that to have own business is more invaluable and others are restrictedely in the favours of working under some reputed organisation than self employment. I will delve both facets before reaching to reasoned conclusion.
There is one of the favourable benefit is that which can clearly be seen if people are doing their own business. Firstly, a person gets able to encounter the most challenging situations. As through the own work procedure people going through the difficult tasks and accepting great deal of challenges because it helps to improving the goal.They take various types of risks and with problems due to this they become a successful.However, company employees do not have to suffer economically, as fixed salary is being transferred to an account. As it is all burden taken by the boss of company and other employees who do work they do not do any pressure because they know about the salary is get by them every month and it is no need to take any struggle. Moving to the flip side of the coin, persons learn the value of the time when they doing work under the pressure of company. Since, company gives lot of instructions which followed by them because they still strict with their time and gives some good efforts as well as be more punctual one does not has to work under any superior authority because they have an own business and they do not care about the time and there are less punctual as compare to the former. In crux, it is depends on the nature and circumstances both works are fruitful for any term whether the choose of self employment or working for company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...d with problems due to this they become a successful.However, company employees do not have ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ms due to this they become a successful.However, company employees do not have to suffe...
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Line 2, column 1055, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...s well as be more punctual one does not has to work under any superior authority be...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...s well as be more punctual one does not has to work under any superior authority be...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...works are fruitful for any term whether the choose of self employment or working for compa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, still, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70486111111 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67623203066 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.370425038 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.555555556 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200636907289 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845821911324 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731351222995 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172257073523 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182658105278 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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