Some people say that self-employment is better than working for a company or institution. Discuss both point of view. What is your opinion.
Being a self employed means you work 12 hours a day yourself, so you don't have to work 8 hours a day for someone else. Nevertheless ,there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that which is consider suitable environment for person ; self employment or job. Through this essay I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my options by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that self employment is better than a job. The strengthen their view point by claiming that with own business they have fully freedom because they don't do work under any pressure . Moreover, they have flexible work hours. As well as they have also a dicision making power. If they want any change in their work, they can be change it without any permission. Moreover, through self employment people gain name and fame and person become idol person for others because through lot of struggle person make a perfect person. A good illustration of this- a recent survey conducted by Hindustan times Smith started their own business of tea in few years ago and now he become a successful business man.
On the other side, there is a group of people who believe that work for someone else is better than self employment. To make their arguments conveincing they claim that in the job people learn lot of things such as team work, discipline, punctuality and so on. In office masses do work with co- operation and person come at office at right time. Therefore, people learn discipline. Moreover, in office people have no bourdon or strees about the loss of company, because all office work depend on owner.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that is no single conclusion . Still, I take this ground that develop require both use of hands. So, it depends on own will.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
Being a self employed means you work 12 hours a day yourself, so yo...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ou work 12 hours a day yourself, so you dont have to work 8 hours a day for someone ...
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Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...urs a day for someone else. Nevertheless ,there are some issues which remains irre...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
..., the given topic asserts that which is consider suitable environment for person ; self ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t self employment is better than a job. The strengthen their view point by claiming that with ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ss they have fully freedom because they dont do work under any pressure . Moreover, ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...use they dont do work under any pressure . Moreover, they have flexible work hours...
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Line 6, column 371, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to discipline'
Suggestion: to discipline
... at right time. Therefore, people learn discipline. Moreover, in office people have no bou...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., I believe that is no single conclusion . Still, I take this ground that develop ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78963414634 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50471939792 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6125780047 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6842105263 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230074716623 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689413169639 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665823455784 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126983635837 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436264690513 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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