You left out your countries to study in abroad. Write your neighbor to
• Inform your leaving
• Describe your place
• say your thanks to her
Dear Mrs Hau,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my journey to Australia. It was successful because we had received helps from my friends. As soon as the flight took off, we moved to an apartment which had been hired a before week and we have been living there until now. It is quite comfortable with full of furniture, but it costs only $500 for rent per month. Moreover, surrounding atmosphere is clean since there are many trees and little litter. Major means of transport is bus; hence, there is rarely traffic jam in rush hour.
By the way, I would like to express my deep gratitude to you because you were my kind neighbor. You were willing to help me with taking care of my children when I was not at home. In addition, while we were on holiday, you kept an eye on my flat. Especially, when I got a problem, I used to ask you for advice.
We will come back home on Tet holiday, so we will visit your family. I hope that you are always healthy and happy.
Yours sincerely,
Ha
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-10 | hoanghadhtm | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...healthy and happy. Yours sincerely, Ha
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, moreover, so, while, in addition, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28571428571 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3170253995 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698412698413 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5145856882 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.3076923077 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125522937295 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514328703008 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805691670892 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701126397715 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420266636604 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.